Primary Publishing Party | 小小作家,自由生长!

By Tuesday November 16th, 2021Events




欢迎来到小学部三年级英文写作坊

THIS Primary Publishing Party 


在十一月初,清华附中国际部小学部的英文传统教学活动——写作“发布会”活动在各年级和班级陆续开展。在每个单元的结束,学生们将自己的写作成果通过分享的形式,与同伴、老师和整个清华附中国际部的大家庭一同庆祝自己的学习成果和成长。在写作“发布会”的活动中,孩子们在“作者”和“读者”的身份之间切换,不但可以将自己的作品展示给其他的读者,获得读者们真实的反馈和收获,还可以阅读到其他同学的写作作品,相互学习。

 

Early November is a time for publishing parties in THIS Primary. At the end of each unit, students celebrate their growth and success by sharing their final writing products with peers, teachers and families. Publishing parties allow for authentic experiences of sharing work for an audience as well as the opportunity for students to read other’s work.


Grade 3

Publishing

Party


在小学部的写作坊中,教师的指导原则是“让学生做学习的主人”,让学生们自主成长为一个个“小作家”。在教学中,老师参照教学标准指导学生对于写作作品进行修改,但不会改变学生原本的写作内容,忠实学生原本的语言。通过这样的教学方式和训练方式,希望学生们能够充分发挥学习自主性,保留作品的原创性,使学生们认识到写作学习不仅局限于完成一个写作作品,而是要熟练掌握所学习的写作技巧,自主运用到之后的写作之中,逐步成长。

 

At THIS Primary we celebrate all students’ growth as writers. This means that although teachers support students in revising and editing their work based on checklists and rubrics, they do not edit or change students writing. This is to further create a growth mindset and put students in the driver’s seat of their learning. Our students know, it is not just about the finished product, but that they can transfer learned skills into their future writing.


Grade 3

Publishing

Party



写作坊的教学重点是让学生掌握写作结构、写作技巧和写作规范,并带领学生进行大量的写作练习和主题选择练习。所以,在我们的写作坊课堂中,我们会看到很多不同主题和不同内容的故事。


Our focus is on the structure, development and conventions of their writing. Students need ample time to practice writing and choice. This is why in each class you will see a variety of topics and stories created.



来自3P Aubrey小作者的收获:

Student Comment from 3P Aubrey


“我已经成长为一个小作家啦!我在我的书里创造了许多又酷又丰富多彩的词语,但是我需要注意拼写啊!有太多错误啦!同时,我下次应该找到一个更好的话题。”

 

“I have grown as a writer. I made cool colorful words in my book (author’s craft) but I have to work more with my spelling. Too many wrong words! Also, I should make a better topic. ”



Grade 3

Publishing

Party



下面,让我们一起来看看本次三年级写作坊的活动吧!本次的写作“发布会”由三年级的两个班级共同参与,写作单元主题是关于个人记叙文。学生们尝试用“讲故事”的方式来写作,分享自己的经历。为了做到这一点,他们学会了在文章中添加对话,添加强有力的线索和结尾,丰富词汇描写,并延伸他们的故事核心。他们通过检查拼写,删除不必要的部分,并绘制图片来编辑和完成他们的故事。


Now, let’s take a closer look at the 3rd grader’s publishing party for this unit. The publishing party celebration incorporated both grade 3 classes. This writing unit was on personal narratives. Students shared their own experiences while trying to use a “storytelling” voice. To do this they learned to add dialogue, use strong leads and endings, enrich their word choices, and stretch out the heart of their stories. They edited and fine-tuned their stories by checking their spelling, eliminating unnecessary parts, and drawing pictures to publish their completed work. 



来听听老师对于三年级同学们写作的评价吧!


Teachers commented on the growth of students in this unit and how amazed they are by our 3rd-grade writers!


 

来自3W班主任Ms. Priya老师的评语 

 Teacher’s Comment from Priya 

 (3W Homeroom Teacher) 



“学生们都很乐于分享和阅读彼此的故事。作为他们的主班老师,我很自豪能从作品中看到他们的成长。同时,能够看到教学成果以这样一种创新的、完整的形式得到展现,学生们也乐在其中。对于我来说,这是非常有意义的。他们从二年级的学习中就打下了很好的基础,我很欣慰能他们在三年级时继续收获语言方面的成长。”

 

“The students were really excited to share and read each other’s stories. As their homeroom teacher, I was proud to see their growth reflected in their work. It’s rewarding to see the products of teaching in a creative and complete way, and have the students eager to leave their best impression. They had a great foundation from Grade 2, and it was gratifying to see this develop and flourish in Grade 3.”



Grade 3

Publishing

Party



小学部的其他班级还有学校的老师们都被一同邀请来阅读孩子们的故事,大家非常享受阅读的过程!每个作品都收到了来自同学和老师们很多的评语,有的说故事的细节描写吸引了读者,有的说故事的结尾非常精彩,还有的说故事的构思很独特……写作坊的现场充满着欢声笑语,小作者们的脸上都洋溢着笑容!


The primary school students and staff were invited to the celebration. Everyone was asked to read the stories and leave a positive comment for the students to encourage their future writing. Some comments complimented students’ use of details to attract readers, others mentioned their fantastic endings. Many comments found the stories creative and fascinating. It was a joyous and happy occasion were smiles could be seen on all of our author’s faces.



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现在,让我们来看看我们部分三年级学生的个人记叙文作品吧!


Now, let’s take a look at some of our 3 graders’ personal narratives!



#  My First Pet, Milk by Amy Zhu #


#  The Missing Light Bulb by Stephen Zhang #


#  The Ballet Class Visitor by Belinda Bao #


#  The Boy in the Dress by Elisa Zhang #


#  Universal Studios by Eric Liu #






来自小学主任Ms. Britni Padilla的话

From Primary Director Ms. Britni Padilla




“见证小学部小作者们的进步是一件令人欣喜的事情!作为小学部主任,在参加每个年级的写作坊的过程中,我看到小学部的学生从1年级到5年级在写作上的过程性变化,以及写作技巧、能力的持续提升。学生们的进步不仅体现在孩子们可以使用更复杂的写作技巧,写作中的词汇量也在持续增加,对于写作的整体理解有所提升。看到学生们能够呈现出结构清晰、内容充实的故事,老师们感到非常开心!”


“It is great to be able to see student’s growth as writers. As the primary Director, I attend each grades publishing parties and am able to see the skill progression from grades 1-5 in action. Not only do students skills become more complex, but their vocabulary and understanding of author’s craft improve immensely. It is always a joy to see students showcase their ability to tell stories in a meaningful and structured way.”



Grade 3

Publishing

Party



清华附中国际部小学部重视学生写作能力的培养,并在每一项课程教学活动中落实国际部的核心价值观,促进学生发展勤于思考、善于合作、敢于创新的学术品质。写作“发布会”活动将国际部的大家庭相聚在一起,学生们不仅通过个人写作的学习完成写作成果,更是在相互阅读和分享的浓厚氛围中,学会与同伴相互尊重,学会倾听,善意的提出自己的建议和接纳他人的意见,从而相互增进,相互激励!


Tsinghua International School puts great emphasis on nurturing writing abilities in primary students. The primary writing workshop practices THIS’s core values to promote students to be diligent, collaborative and innovative learners. Publishing parties are a great chance to bring the THIS community together to former a positive atmosphere revolved around reading and communication rather than students finishing independent writing alone. Through this event, students learned to be good listeners and to be repectful towards other’s work and opinions. This results in the THIS community being mutually encouraged and moving forward together.




文字 Writing & 图片 Pictures | Britni Padilla, Priya Govender,Maggie Cheng, Mercy Xu

排版 Editing | Mercy Xu

审核 Auditing |  Britni Padilla, Toni Dong, Wenping Li



本篇文章来源于微信公众号: 清华附中国际部

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